Idea Walk through

I have been given feedback on my idea and progress so far. It has been suggested that I need to consider why the girls imagination turns against her, like a trigger of some kind.

After giving this much thought, i realized the creatures i researched and like in many of the literary and film depictions of them, they only attacked humans if they felt threatened, so i thought this would be the best idea. 

Below is a draft run through of my how i picture my idea going:

Audio/visual run through

A young girl in a white dress is standing in a forest. The Forest is dead and dark, the sun is covered by grey clouds. The ground is muddy and wet; the girl’s bare feet are covered in dirt. She starts to walk slowly and cautiously down the dirt path. She does not seem frightened; she appears to be in awe.

Fantastical Music starts. The girl continues to walk. The trees begin to grow many different colored flowers. Grass starts to grow under her feet in place of the mud, the clouds part to show a blue sky, the sky changes color from blue to purple then red then yellow, and continues to change through many different bright colors.

The girl crouches to sniff one of the flowers to find that it is made of paper. She smiles. She stands up and starts running through the forest happy and laughing. She comes across a beautiful stream. She runs her foot through the water and the mud washes away.

Then something small and glowing appears from behind the girl, she see’s it, it flies around her head and around her body. It stops on the branch of a tree. It is a fairy. The girl stands looking up at the fairy. Soon more fairies start to appear, some from the trees, some from behind flowers and in flowers, some from water and some in the grass. They fly around the girl, dancing in the air.

A friendly looking faun appears from behind a tree. And walks across to the girl, it starts dancing with her. She breaks away and starts chasing the fairies trying to catch one, She catches one in her hands and it struggles to get free, she does not let it go, the fairy in her hands becomes angry and turns black. It bites her hand and she lets go. Lightning flashes and black clouds quickly form over head. The Other fairies turn black and started darting at the girl like bullets. She runs to the Faun for help but the faun also has turned dark and grown fangs. It roars at the girl blood flying from it’s mouth. The girl runs away but the grass turns to black oil and she slips and slides, the oil grabs at the girl as though arms are sprouting from the earth. The roots of the trees come alive and start slashing and grabbing the girl as the fairies continue to fly at the girl. The girl screams cries and pulls against the trees roots; they cut into her arms and legs. A troll emerges from the oil right next to the girl. It’s teeth bared, oil dripping down its face and body. It reaches out for the girl.

The girl looks up into the eyes of the troll, determination in her eyes. Big balls of white light start flying from the ground and the sky into the girl, her eyes start to glow, brighter with each ball of light. She lets out a scream and the lights shoots from her in a wide circle. The troll, the fairies and the Faun turn to dust. The oil turns back into grass and the sky turns back to blue. The tree roots release her and sink back into the ground. The girl looks around, and then skips down the path humming as she does.